Chapter 12 Starting word count - 2304 Added several commas to split-up run-on sentences Fixed improper spelling of a character's name Reworked several lines of dialogue to sound less pretentious Reworked several sentences for better flow Removed redundant dialogue Removed redundant narration Final word count - 2252 Interlude 1 Starting Word Count - 377 Finished the first interlude, Valen scripture, inspired heavily from the New Testament. Added several commas to split-up run-

Chapter 6: Starting word count - 2496 Added several commas to split-up run-on sentences Reworked several lines of dialogue to feel more natural and less "wordy" Removed instances of unneeded commas Removed several unneeded words, improving flow Removed instances of unnecessary world-building/details Final word count - 2415 Chapter 7: Starting word count - 2639 Added several commas to split-up run-on sentences Fixed 2 instances of "worst case", changing them to "worst-case" Re

Chapter 3: Starting word count - 2912 Added several commas to split up run-on sentences Fixed 1 instance of "multicoloured", changing it to "multi-coloured" Fixed 1 instance of "morepurposeful", changing it to "more purposeful" Fixed 1 instance of "nought", changing it to "naught" Fixed 1 instance of "pin cushions", changing it to "pincushions" Fixed 1 instance of a question missing a question mark Fixed 1 instance of a missing word. "She". Added it so the sentence made sense

Prologue: Starting word count - 1886 Added several commas to spit-up run-on sentences Fixed 2 instances improper comma use and replaced with semi-colons Fixed 1 instance of improper comma use and replaced it with a colon Fixed several instances of improper use of the term "Arvel" Fixed awkward conversation flow by reworking dialogue between characters Removed instances of unneeded commas Removed several unneeded words, improving reading flow Removed/reworked instances of the