Chapter 12 Starting word count - 2304 Added several commas to split-up run-on sentences Fixed improper spelling of a character's name Reworked several lines of dialogue to sound less pretentious Rewor
Chapter 6: Starting word count - 2496 Added several commas to split-up run-on sentences Reworked several lines of dialogue to feel more natural and less "wordy" Removed instances of unneeded commas Re
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